Today we have been writing explanation texts about this fabulous invention that helps people get to sleep. We were trying to use causal conjunctions and powerful vocabulary.
The Snoozatron from BEE 209 on Vimeo.
Bumblebees
Today we have been writing explanation texts about this fabulous invention that helps people get to sleep. We were trying to use causal conjunctions and powerful vocabulary.
The Snoozatron from BEE 209 on Vimeo.
This snoozatron is so good it will blow your mind!
This machine is definitely spectacular.
It can make you fall asleep in ten minutes!
In fact, I think that every single school should have a Snoozatron because it would be really helpful to get to sleep and the next day you will not be tired and get to school as quick as a flash!!!
This amazing machine will help you to sleep. You can turn this on when you come home at midnight you would want to get to sleep. Sometimes you wouldn’t want to use it for that because you could wake them up at midnight but they would spend most of there night bouncing on a spring to the owners bedroom and they would rather be in bed.
You could also use it like to use it as Wallace used the snoozatron.
I dislike the snoozatron a bit because the person who is the sheep holder was happily sleeping when suddenly the alarm flashes.
Great piece of work Holly!
Great piece of work you have put a lot of time and effort into your writing.
well done!!!
Wow! This is great work and great handwriting bumblebees. But was is a snoozeatron.
It is a spectacular machine which makes you fall asleep really quickly, although the person who is the sheep holder was sleeping happily until they end up bouncing on a spring for the whole night!