I love silly Mr Bean,
driving around in his car so green.
Everywhere he drags poor Ted,
even taking him to bed.
Shared Writing
A sad young girl called Cinderalla.
spends all day in the cellar.
working hard mopping the floor,
feeling sad because she’s so poor.
Alfie and Liana.
can we learn next about ancent Egypt
You will have to wait until Year Five I’m afraid Alfie. Which punctuation type have you missed?
I love silly Mr Bean
driving in his car so clean
dragging ted even
into bed
by Amy I
I like your poem Amy. I can see that you have followed most of the rules for this poem type.
Don’t forget to end each line
with a happy, jolly rhyme!